Examining ACT Essay Examples
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We spend a lot of time talking about most of the essential the different parts of a ACT style that is good essay. In this episode we will have a look at some sample essays that were compiled by actual students as a result to an ACT style prompt. Furthermore they certainly were graded by actual teachers and evaluated in the ACT Rubric, so just a reminder the Rubric is going to consider seven indicators for the ACT in their understanding of task, position, complexity, development, organization, sentences and word grammar and choice. So let us take a look at those essays to see how they compare well in the scale.
Let’s take a do my homework for me good look at example essay number 1, go directly to the bonus materials and download it. It scored an 11 this means one teacher gave it a five and something teacher gave it the utmost possible points, that was a six. I will read through the first paragraph for you to have it printed out in front of you with you but, it would be essential. Alright so that it starts, ‘The perennial problem facing schools in the united states today is dropout rates. This blight that is stubborn refused to disappear completely despite of many different methods enacted by schools to get rid of it. In a school that is certain two of the methods have already been proposed-either offering free tutoring or offering a wider selection of classes. Even though the idea of free tutoring sounds attractive, the solution is based on offering a wider selection of classes, which ultimately encourages students to stay in school.’ This essay goes on to give ample support of information about why it is vital to give a wider variety of classes and furthermore really hummers home a strong counter argument that shows why free tutoring just will not work. (más…)